The other big concern about the script is that it doesn't give the audience any major twists on Mitchell. From the beginning, the audience knows that Mitchell is a killer. There are no big reveals at the end. Of course, not every blockbuster needs a twist, but since the script is so familiar, it would be helpful. The mother mentioned a twin and one wonders if there should be a twist regarding the other child. That being said, there is a final reveal or twist with the idea that Tracy is pregnant. However, it feels like a clichéd ending. It's been done before. It does not provide a strong emotional response. Finally, professional presentation can be elevated. There are many pages where the action descriptions are not formatted correctly. For example: page 54, 55, 56, 64, 87, 88, 89 etc. It makes writing harder to read. The length of a script for this type of story is considered long, but it may also be due to the stacking format technique used and may actually be shorter than the page numbers. However, it would be beneficial for the script to reduce the length/page